Really great work! I'm holding off on reading the author's notes until I give this feedback and score the pieces but I really like the symbolism you used throughout this piece. I think you did a good job fairly representing both sides of what makes art beautiful (in my interpretation) for the most part, and I appreciate that there was a message of coming back stronger from being broken. I think you wrote these things in a nuanced way that I appreciated seeing. Thanks for participating, I hope to see you in the next one! :)
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I really appreciate the notes!! Thank you for hosting these writing events :)
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That was awesome :). I wish you the best of luck with the competition!